第二組小說接龍會員 入一入來

寶石海星.小星星

第一組的人已超過我們了
我們要想對策了~

我發現我地真的是接龍,各顧各~
要商量一下了

我認為:
小衝已成主角了,
如打場館,寫左小衝破左的,其他人就不必寫了
兔子的練鐵場拿到什麼東西真的想不出來......

大家的意見呢??

PS:里區的板主,借個位來比我地..........[E-Swe]

[ Last edited by 寶石海星.小星星 on 2005-2-20 at 02:26 AM ]

比超仔

由於今天是限期...請大家盡量作到完結,我已把劇情改成差不到完結

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to 比超仔 :

Originally posted by 可愛的兔兒
個個都打gym會令故事變得好慢

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1)The three boys left the gym
=小行等人離開gym
>>Correct!

2)They were going to call Blue(the girl)
=他們找藍兒
>>call(on phone!)
>>They were going to = They were planning to
>>They were going to call Blue=他們were planning to call 藍兒 on phone

3)But before they call Blue,the nurse had called them.
=找完藍兒後,護士叫佢地
>>Before!!!
>>The order should be : 護士call他們on phone >>>then>>>他們call 藍兒 on phone
> It should be :before他們call 藍兒.......護士call他們
4)The nurse told them that  Jynx , Electabuzz and Magmar had been stolen
護士話佢地dpm 還返比小

比超仔

Originally posted by 可愛的兔兒 at 2005-3-10 08:25 PM:

well.......which word u don't understand....u can ask me.......

......I just want to tell you that........


1)I cannot type Chinese now

2)I want to keep writing the battle part

3)I  ...

1)The three boys left the gym
=小行等人離開gym

2)They were going to call Blue(the girl)
=他們找藍兒

3)But before they call Blue,the nurse had called them.
=找完藍兒後,護士叫佢地

4)The nurse told them that  Jynx , Electabuzz and Magmar had been stolen
護士話佢地dpm 還返比小

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Originally posted by 比超仔 at 2005-3-10 06:08 PM:
不懂English~=.=

well.......which word u don't understand....u can ask me.......

......I just want to tell you that........


1)I cannot type Chinese now

2)I want to keep writing the battle part

3)I want you to continue the story without that part


And you may continue the story like that.....
.
.
1)The three boys left the gym

2)They were going to call Blue(the girl)

3)But before they call Blue,the nurse had called them.

4)The nurse told them that  Jynx , Electabuzz and Magmar had been stolen

5)Kartio came.............




Oh~My~God~
Can any one explain it to him in Chinese?[E-Ah][E-Ah][E-Ah][E-Ah][E-Ah]

比超仔

不懂English~=.=

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Oh~My~God~
Any body here?

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well......u guys can continue the story now.....
actually......my computer was broken down........i am not able to type chinese now......
but i want to keep the battle part......may i?
.......u may continue like this.....

after winning the gym master,the three guys went out of the gym.
when they were gonna call Blue.......the nurse of the pokemon centre called them and told tem that Jynx , Electabuzz and Magmar were stolen
then ....... Kartior appeared...............to be continued

well.....I am very sorry about this

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同樓上.....