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發表於 12/7/2010 03:33 PM | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |正序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
本帖最後由 may_ag 於 12/7/2010 04:52 PM 編輯

adhere 遵守;堅持
In order to adhere to the promise ,Ash battles with Max.

adequate 勝任的
Ash does not recall Charizard,He believes that his team of Sinnoh pokemon  is adequate to defeat Paul.

accumulate
累積,積聚;積攢
sophisticated
1. 老於世故的
Pikachu has accumulated a lot of experience in the journe.Accordingly,He is a
sophisticated pokemon.
accordingly
照著;相應地
Charizard trains himself hard in the Charizard's hill  .Accordingly,He become the strongest pokemon of Ash.

abrupt
突然的;意外的
Ash found the egg of Togepi abruptly.

unconscious
不省人事的,失去知覺的
All of Ahs's pokemons  are unconscious.Accordingly,he is defeated by Paul.

abolish
廢除,廢止
If the rule of a trainer can bring 6 pokemon is abolished.Will Ash bring all of his pokemon in the journey.

abuse
濫用,妄用
Max is worrying  about May because she abuses the move Overheat.

absurd
不合理的,荒謬的;可笑的,愚蠢的

The way of Ash to train his pokemons is absurd in Paul's eyes.


airy
虛幻的;出於空想的
Determination without adhere is airy.
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發表於 13/7/2010 11:19 PM | 只看該作者
有不少單詞像是被強行放入句子那樣
感覺不協調,也不符合語感

強烈建議樓主用英-英字典翻查各詞的真正意義
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 樓主| 發表於 13/7/2010 09:51 PM | 只看該作者

我會再努力提醒自己
不過我有學障,所以常錯
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發表於 13/7/2010 09:44 PM | 只看該作者

那之前做proofreading吧,題題都發現了問題,人們都只看grammar就帶不出你想表達的東西
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 樓主| 發表於 13/7/2010 09:41 PM | 只看該作者
其實多數都是grammar問題,,
放上來前為何不放入words check一check?
放上pnve大家都是來看structure和meanning唉=口=(?)
Mayuki~* 發表於 13/7/2010 04:22 PM

我家無WORD
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發表於 13/7/2010 04:31 PM | 只看該作者
樓主勇氣可嘉
精神上支持
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發表於 13/7/2010 04:26 PM | 只看該作者
Accordingly 不等於 As a result
Abruptly 不等於 by chance / by accident
Please look into the dictionary for their sample sentences.

Determination without adhere is airy.
This is problematic because (i) "adhere" is a verb but you need a noun here; (ii) it doesn't make sense even if you change it to "adherence" - which usually only means "state of being sticky". A better alternative would be "perseverance".
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發表於 13/7/2010 04:22 PM | 只看該作者
其實多數都是grammar問題,,
放上來前為何不放入words check一check?
放上pnve大家都是來看structure和meanning唉=口=(?)
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發表於 13/7/2010 03:20 PM | 只看該作者
amendment修正案n
Lost from Paul,Ash know that his strategy need some amendment.
consent同意 v
Ash do not consent to the way of paul to train his pokemon.
may_ag 發表於 13-7-2010 15:05


know -> knows

need -> needs

do not -> does not

(請問這是proofreading練習嗎?)
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 樓主| 發表於 13/7/2010 03:05 PM | 只看該作者
本帖最後由 may_ag 於 13/7/2010 09:41 PM 編輯

amendment修正案n
Lost from Paul,Ash knows that his strategy need some amendment.
  
consent同意 v
Ash does not consent to the way of paul to train his pokemon.

row
The rows between May and Max is endless.
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