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作者: may_ag    時間: 12/7/2010 03:33 PM
標題: 幾句有關PM的造句
本帖最後由 may_ag 於 12/7/2010 04:52 PM 編輯

adhere 遵守;堅持
In order to adhere to the promise ,Ash battles with Max.

adequate 勝任的
Ash does not recall Charizard,He believes that his team of Sinnoh pokemon  is adequate to defeat Paul.

accumulate
累積,積聚;積攢
sophisticated
1. 老於世故的
Pikachu has accumulated a lot of experience in the journe.Accordingly,He is a
sophisticated pokemon.
accordingly
照著;相應地
Charizard trains himself hard in the Charizard's hill  .Accordingly,He become the strongest pokemon of Ash.

abrupt
突然的;意外的
Ash found the egg of Togepi abruptly.

unconscious
不省人事的,失去知覺的
All of Ahs's pokemons  are unconscious.Accordingly,he is defeated by Paul.

abolish
廢除,廢止
If the rule of a trainer can bring 6 pokemon is abolished.Will Ash bring all of his pokemon in the journey.

abuse
濫用,妄用
Max is worrying  about May because she abuses the move Overheat.

absurd
不合理的,荒謬的;可笑的,愚蠢的

The way of Ash to train his pokemons is absurd in Paul's eyes.


airy
虛幻的;出於空想的
Determination without adhere is airy.
作者: star12311231    時間: 12/7/2010 03:56 PM
文法有錯誤
作者: secret    時間: 12/7/2010 04:01 PM
本帖最後由 secret 於 12/7/2010 04:04 PM 編輯
adhere 遵守;堅持
In order to adhere to the promise ,Ash battles with Max.

adequate 勝任的
Ashdoesnot recall Charizard,Hebelievesthat his team of Sinnoh Pokemon  is adequate to defeat Paul.

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may_ag 發表於 12/7/2010 03:33 PM

                               
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adhere
In order to adhere to the promise ,Ash battles with Max.

adequate
Ashdoesnot recall Charizard,Hebelievesthat his team of Sinnoh pokemon  is adequate to defeat Paul.

accumulate
Pikachuhasaccumulated a lot of experience in the journey.

accordingly
Charizardtrainshimself hard in the Charizard's hill  .Accordingly,Hebecomesthe strongest pokemon of Ash.



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There's something wrong with sentence structure. Those sentences look really odd,and many words do not fit in the sentences.
作者: 拉麵仔    時間: 12/7/2010 04:07 PM
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作者: secret    時間: 12/7/2010 04:09 PM
本帖最後由 secret 於 12/7/2010 04:24 PM 編輯
accumulate 係v來
點解同一句有have+accumulate兩個v?
拉麵仔 發表於 12/7/2010 04:07 PM

                               
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That's present perfect tense.

I strongly suggest #1 go to English Poke'mon sites and read more.

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By the way:

unconscious
All of the pokemon(s)ofAshis(are)unconscious.Accordingly,he is defeated by Paul.
<There're too many ''of''s, use ''Ash's pokemon(s) instead.Moreover, according to the title ''Pocket Monsters'', ''pokemon'' should be in plural .

abolish
If the rulethata trainer can bring 6 pokemon is abolished,wouldAsh bring all of his pokemon in the journey?
<The word ''just'' is just unnecessary.

abuse
Maxis worryingabout May,because sheabusesthe move Overheat.

abrupt
Ash found the egg ofTogepi abruptly.
<Strongly suggest capital letters for names.
作者: may_ag    時間: 12/7/2010 04:19 PM
That's present perfect tense.

I strongly suggest #1 go to English Poke'mon sites and read more.
secret 發表於 12/7/2010 04:09 PM

                               
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http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/
You means this?
作者: secret    時間: 12/7/2010 04:35 PM
本帖最後由 secret 於 12/7/2010 04:41 PM 編輯
http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/
You means this?
may_ag 發表於 12/7/2010 04:19 PM

                               
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Unfortunately I was not able to visit that site.
I'd prefer sites such as serebii.net and pokebeach.com.


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absurd
The methodthatAshtrainshis pokemons is absurd in Paul's eyes.
<I'd prefer replacing ''method'' with ''way''.
作者: may_ag    時間: 13/7/2010 03:05 PM
本帖最後由 may_ag 於 13/7/2010 09:41 PM 編輯

amendment修正案n
Lost from Paul,Ash knows that his strategy need some amendment.
  
consent同意 v
Ash does not consent to the way of paul to train his pokemon.

row
The rows between May and Max is endless.
作者: Ivanhy92    時間: 13/7/2010 03:20 PM
amendment修正案n
Lost from Paul,Ash know that his strategy need some amendment.
consent同意 v
Ash do not consent to the way of paul to train his pokemon.
may_ag 發表於 13-7-2010 15:05

                               
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know -> knows

need -> needs

do not -> does not

(請問這是proofreading練習嗎?)
作者: Ｍaｙuｋi～＊    時間: 13/7/2010 04:22 PM
其實多數都是grammar問題,,
放上來前為何不放入words check一check？
放上pnve大家都是來看structure和meanning唉=口=(？)
作者: zubat    時間: 13/7/2010 04:26 PM
Accordingly 不等於 As a result
Abruptly 不等於 by chance / by accident
Please look into the dictionary for their sample sentences.

Determination without adhere is airy.
This is problematic because (i) "adhere" is a verb but you need a noun here; (ii) it doesn't make sense even if you change it to "adherence" - which usually only means "state of being sticky". A better alternative would be "perseverance".
作者: Eric1874    時間: 13/7/2010 04:31 PM
樓主勇氣可嘉
精神上支持
作者: may_ag    時間: 13/7/2010 09:41 PM
其實多數都是grammar問題,,
放上來前為何不放入words check一check？
放上pnve大家都是來看structure和meanning唉=口=(？)
Ｍaｙuｋi～＊ 發表於 13/7/2010 04:22 PM

                               
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我家無WORD
作者: mtps55699    時間: 13/7/2010 09:44 PM
我家無WORD
may_ag 發表於 13/7/2010 09:41 PM

                               
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那之前做proofreading吧，題題都發現了問題，人們都只看grammar就帶不出你想表達的東西
作者: may_ag    時間: 13/7/2010 09:51 PM
那之前做proofreading吧，題題都發現了問題，人們都只看grammar就帶不出你想表達的東西
mtps55699 發表於 13/7/2010 09:44 PM

                               
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我會再努力提醒自己
不過我有學障,所以常錯
作者: secret    時間: 13/7/2010 11:19 PM
有不少單詞像是被強行放入句子那樣
感覺不協調，也不符合語感

強烈建議樓主用英-英字典翻查各詞的真正意義



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