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標題: DP186(個人創作,絕非官方消息)(7 月10日更新) [打印本頁]

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作者: may_ag    時間: 7/7/2010 08:17 PM
標題: DP186(個人創作,絕非官方消息)(7 月10日更新)


Remark:May has come to be a audience.

The referee officially states the rules; the battle will be a full battle, six-on-six with substitutions freely allowed on both sides. Coin Toss is used to decide who gets to pick their Pokemon first, and Paul wins. He sends out Torterra first.
The reason for Ash to recall Gliscor from McCann is to handle paul's Torterra.
Therefore,Ash sends out his Gliscor with out hesitation.
The referee begins the match,
Paul orders Torterra to use Giga Drain.
Although Gliscor flies away, the Giga Drain scores a direct hit.
Brock tells May that Ash has ordered Gliscor intended to be hit to try so as to let Paul look down on
Gliscor and mislead Paul to use Frenzy Plant.
Seeing the motion of Gliscor ,Paul thinks that Gliscor do not have any improvement under the training of McCann.
Paul orders Frenzy Plant and convince it can cause  Gliscor to faint.
Nevertheless, Gliscor escape from the Frenzy Plant by the skin of his teeth.
Gliscor have the ability to escape form it easIly,but he still want to hid his power.
Paul feels surprises but he have no worry at all.
Gliscor  use fire fang , X-scissor and ice fang consecutively when Torterra is immobile .
Ash receives  expression in Gliscor's eyes then orders him to use Giga impact.
Paul knows nothing about the strategy of Giga impact of Gliscor's,then orders Torterra to use Giga Drain again.
After the Giga impact has hit Torterra, Gliscor is immobile but he draw back by the power of the wind.As a result,the Giga Drain misses.

Until now,Paul disdain Ash' Gliscor  no more.
Paul recall Torterra to prevent Gliscor defeat his Torterra .

Ash need the help of Gliscor to defeat Paul's Torterra ,he don't to venture his Gliscor vigor in flighting with Paul's Gliscor.Then he recall his Gliscor. And send out his Buizel.
Paul's Gliscor usesand attack and Buizel use counter shield of aqua jet to resist the sand attack completely.
Paul's Gliscor escaps from the aqua jet and recalled by Paul.
Paul's sends out Electabuzz and order him to uses light screen.
When Electabuzz uses light screen,Ash recalls Buizel and send Infernape.
Paul orders Electabuzz to use Protect while Ash orders Infernape to useBrick Break.
Electabuzz does not get hurt because of the Protect but the light screen is destroyed.
Then Paul recalls Electabuzz and sends Honchkrow .
Ash recalls Infernape and sendTorterraconsequently.
Honchkrow useNight Slash,Brave Bird and Shadow Ball consecutively.
Torterra do nothing but just endure the attack.
Knowing Ash's strategy,Paul does not order Honchkrow toapproach Torterra any more butorders Honchkrow to use Shadow Ball repetitively.
In the second attack ,Ash releases that it is the very moment to turn defeat into victory.
Ash ordersTorterrato use Rock Climb.
The Rock Climb raises the ground in a second such theTorterra can approach flyingHonchkrow and press it on the ground .
Paul was shocked by the power of the Torterra.
Ashshouts “Leaf Storm, by the run“
Torterra uses Leaf Storm in such short distant make a criticle hit toHonchkrow.
However, Honchkrow still escapes fromTorterra's foots.
Paul recallsHonchkrow in this very moment.

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作者: 路比    時間: 7/7/2010 08:28 PM
這是……小說嗎？

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作者: may_ag    時間: 7/7/2010 08:30 PM

這是……小說嗎？
征服者乂路比 發表於 7/7/2010 08:28 PM

                               
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你認為這是劇本?
未寫完的

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作者: ~夏天仔~    時間: 7/7/2010 08:42 PM

你認為這是劇本?
未寫完的
may_ag 發表於 7/7/2010 08:30 PM

                               
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不，簡單來說，只是從寫一處戰鬥OR什麼?

但小說的話，最緊要都要個人物介紹吧！

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作者: may_ag    時間: 7/7/2010 09:19 PM

不，簡單來說，只是從寫一處戰鬥OR什麼?

但小說的話，最緊要都要個人物介紹吧！
slsps 發表於 7/7/2010 08:42 PM

                               
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我本來在新聞區寫,估計D168的內容
但有會員建議我來小說區寫

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作者: 路比    時間: 7/7/2010 09:20 PM
那我建議你到聊天閒聊區。

1. 會員不得發表任何不合乎「小說定義」或內容過分像劇本的文章。

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作者: may_ag    時間: 7/7/2010 09:22 PM
請版主代為移帖(到適當的分區,我也弄不清楚)

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作者: roy007    時間: 8/7/2010 11:37 AM

請版主代為移帖(到適當的分區,我也弄不清楚)
may_ag 發表於 7/7/2010 09:22 PM

                               
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你呢d係估計內容就唔該唔好放係度誤導人
就咁簡單

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作者: johnsze    時間: 8/7/2010 11:59 PM
1# may_ag

一句都唔明佢講咩@>@
翻譯丫唔該....><

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作者: may_ag    時間: 9/7/2010 12:49 AM


是我英文差,還你是沒心機看?你可以用YAHOO字典查解釋
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接上文

Ash need the help ofGliscor to defeat Paul's Torterra ,he don't to venture his Gliscor vigor in flighting with Paul's Gliscor.Then he recall his Gliscor. And send out his Buizel.
Paul's Gliscor use sand attack and Buizel use counter shield of aqua jet to resist the sand attack completely.
Paul's Gliscor escap from the aqua jet and recalled by Paul.
Paul's send out Electabuzz and order him to use light screen.
When Electabuzz use light screen,Ash recall Buizel and send Torterra.
Then Paul's recall Electabuzz and send Honchkrow .
待續

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作者: johnsze    時間: 9/7/2010 01:12 AM
係我英文差...同冇心機看英文...
有中文就好了..@@

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作者: may_ag    時間: 9/7/2010 06:48 AM
我英文差,要寫多D英文

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作者: elvis    時間: 9/7/2010 10:57 AM
至少我肯定不是新聞和週邊。

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作者: lly    時間: 9/7/2010 11:08 AM
話說該移去小說區嗎, 還是聊天區...
樓主的意願是...

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作者: elvis    時間: 9/7/2010 11:16 AM

樓主的意願是...
lly 發表於 9/7/2010 11:08 AM

                               
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「唔知」

但認真講句呢，呢篇野點睇都只係將戰報英文化咁咋喎，
我相信用返相同定義都唔可以列入作小說。

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作者: secret    時間: 9/7/2010 11:31 AM


我不認為聊天區版主會願意接收這篇「戰報」啊

只能說，樓主的英文寫作有很大的改善空間

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作者: DL    時間: 9/7/2010 11:55 AM
16# secret
轉去戰報區xsk
(不過真係既話剎那佢地應該會即時郁手做野xsk)

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作者: secret    時間: 9/7/2010 12:11 PM

16# secret  
轉去戰報區xsk
(不過真係既話剎那佢地應該會即時郁手做野xsk)
dl1s26 發表於 9/7/2010 11:55 AM

                               
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把偽戰報移到戰報區不知剎那 君和胡B要發多大的火啊......

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作者: fortexe2    時間: 9/7/2010 12:24 PM
樓主  特別人物請用中文註解

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作者: secret    時間: 9/7/2010 01:49 PM

樓主  特別人物請用中文註解
fortexe2 發表於 9/7/2010 12:24 PM

                               
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代答：
Ash=智
Paul=Shinji=真司
May=遙
Brock=剛

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作者: hkchan5544    時間: 9/7/2010 05:29 PM

是我英文差,還你是沒心機看?你可以用YAHOO字典查解釋
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接上文

Ash need the help of Gliscor to defeat Paul's Torterra ,he don't to venture his Gliscor vigor i ...
may_ag 發表於 9/7/2010 12:49 AM

                               
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英文唔得果個唔係你-.-
係我-.-
囧

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作者: fortexe2    時間: 9/7/2010 09:53 PM


小光fans問 :  點解好似冇「深藏不露鐵裙子」--小光

有冇check文=.=he she it後面verb要加s=.=

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作者: may_ag    時間: 10/7/2010 02:29 PM

話說該移去小說區嗎, 還是聊天區...
樓主的意願是...
lly 發表於 9/7/2010 11:08 AM

                               
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本帖本來在小說區,後來被移到新聞區
在那裡我也沒所謂,總之有地方收服本帖就可以了
移去心情文章都得

但認真講句呢，呢篇野點睇都只係將戰報英文化咁咋喎，

elvis 發表於 9/7/2010 11:16 AM

                               
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我有寫小智和真司的思路,寫的也不合NDS規則
雖然唔算正式小說,但也不是戰報

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作者: secret    時間: 10/7/2010 08:09 PM

本帖本來在小說區,後來被移到新聞區
在那裡我也沒所謂,總之有地方收服本帖就可以了
移去心情文章都得

我有寫小智和真司的思路,寫的也不合NDS規則
雖然唔算正式小說,但也不是戰報
may_ag 發表於 10/7/2010 02:29 PM

                               
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我想了很久
真的覺得這區較合適
其他各區的版主表示此帖不宜放在別的地方

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作者: may_ag    時間: 10/7/2010 08:14 PM


我並沒有任何不滿
並十分尊重管理員的決定
希望不會引起誤會

Paul's Gliscor escaps from the aqua jet and recalled by Paul.
Paul's sends out Electabuzz and order him to uses light screen.
When Electabuzz uses light screen,Ash recalls Buizel and send Infernape.
Paul orders Electabuzz to use Protect while Ash orders Infernape to useBrick Break.
Electabuzz does not get hurt because of the Protect but the light screen is destroyed.
Then Paul recalls Electabuzz and sends Honchkrow .
Ash recalls Infernape and sendTorterraconsequently.
Honchkrow useNight Slash,Brave Bird and Shadow Ball consecutively.
Torterra do nothing but just endure the attack.
Knowing Ash's strategy,Paul does not order Honchkrow toapproach Torterra any more butorders Honchkrow to use Shadow Ball repetitively.
In the second attack ,Ash releases that it is the very moment to turn defeat into victory.
Ash ordersTorterrato use Rock Climb.
The Rock Climb raises the ground in a second such theTorterra can approach flyingHonchkrow and press it on the ground .
Paul was shocked by the power of the Torterra.
Ashshouts “Leaf Storm, by the run“
Torterra uses Leaf Storm in such short distant make a criticle hit toHonchkrow.
However, Honchkrow still escapes fromTorterra's foots.
Paul recallsHonchkrow in this very moment.

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作者: 自欺欺人    時間: 14/7/2010 02:28 PM
其實點解唔用中文寫

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作者: fortexe2    時間: 14/7/2010 03:22 PM
想upgrade英文掛..............

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作者: bobo88728    時間: 18/8/2010 04:41 PM
全英文-v-見到刀唔想睇

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