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作者: Echo21 時間: 17/12/2004 08:19 PM
標題: Young Post登了我篇文......
今天看SCMP的Young Post
發現Have Your Say那part有我篇文......
那篇文被老師評做B-
YP又登......
無言......

作者: 莫邪 時間: 17/12/2004 08:36 PM
有無樣本可以睇下

作者: Echo21 時間: 17/12/2004 08:43 PM

莫邪在 2004-12-17 20:36 發表:

有無樣本可以睇下

Handy device

I am writing to express my opinion on whether schools should permit students to bring their mobile phones.
   Although our school has banned handsets from the premises, I think they are necessary for some students. For example, I learn the piano every Thursday. If my teacher wants to cancel the lesson at the last moment, he can always reach me on my mobile phone.
   Our school authorities do not allow mobile phones because they are worried that students will lose the expensive devices.
   I don't agree. The ban has forced some students to hide the mobile phones in their schoolbags. This can lead to theft. Conversely, if our school lifts the ban, students can put the mobile phones in their pockets and they will be safe. The school can set up some rules before allowing handset on the campus.

Oscar
Sha Tin Government Secondary School

作者: dolphin_ice 時間: 17/12/2004 09:03 PM

Echo21 在 2004-12-17 08:43 PM 發表:

Handy device

I am writing to express my opinion on whether schools should permit students to bring their mobile phones.
Although our school has banned handsets from the premises, I think t ...

係又作得幾好喎。

作者: Echo21 時間: 17/12/2004 09:06 PM

紅唇娃 在 2004-12-17 21:03 發表:

係又作得幾好喎。

原文是被editor改過的
原本應該長一點的......

作者: dolphin_ice 時間: 17/12/2004 09:13 PM

Echo21 在 2004-12-17 09:06 PM 發表:

原文是被editor改過的
原本應該長一點的......

哈哈﹐我0岩0岩想講話"好似太短喎"...

作者: Harpuia 時間: 17/12/2004 09:14 PM

Echo21 在 20:19 發表:

今天看SCMP的Young Post
發現Have Your Say那part有我篇文......
那篇文被老師評做B-
YP又登......
無言......

有咩?第幾頁?我唔見

作者: yat 時間: 17/12/2004 10:19 PM
這不是一件好事嗎？

作者: 幻藍 時間: 17/12/2004 10:33 PM
作得不錯
但短左少少
D學幾淺.....

作者: Echo21 時間: 18/12/2004 02:09 PM

BBQ 在 2004-12-17 21:14 發表:

有咩?第幾頁?我唔見

第十頁HAVE YOUR SAY
右方的

作者: Harpuia 時間: 18/12/2004 05:07 PM

Echo21 在 14:09 發表:

第十頁HAVE YOUR SAY
右方的

哦.........見到啦!!(你叫Oscar??)

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